This week, one thing that worked really well was rambling on about my belief. I didn't sound preachy, and I made it interesting enough to make the reader want to keep reading. Throughout the year I have made a lot of progress. My voice have become really strong. My problem this week was trying to relate my personal life to my work. I don't like putting my personal life because I believe I have a relatively boring life. But with my personal touch is asked for, I will try harder.